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If I would Fall...

Would you catch me?

If I would Fall...

Would you come save me?

If I would Fall...

Would you stop me from getting hurt?

If I would Fall...

Would you promise you'd be there?

If I would Fall...

Would you sweep me up in your arms?

If I would Fall...

Would you love me?
:rose: this poem was the frist poem i wrote
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JadeyJade Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2007  Student Digital Artist
very nice keep it up ^^
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Mahkohime Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2007  Hobbyist General Artist
Very cute poem. I could see this on a Valentines Day card. :)
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GaaraisHotXD Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2007
deep
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LonelyDreamer13 Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2007  Hobbyist General Artist
beautiful poem :aww:
very eligent and simple and yet it says so much
i love poems like that!!
great work :nod:
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Eternal-Nightmare202 Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2007
o.0 that is awesome!
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Eternal-Nightmare202 Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2007
o.0 that is awesome!
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Eternal-Nightmare202 Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2007
o.0 that is awesome!
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NatalieMolko Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2007
it´s great...i really like it :D keep up writing poems like this! :glomp:
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FrozenVictim Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2007
It's very beautiful, hun. :heart: Really good way to ask someone if they love you. ;)
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